I enjoyed this novelette and the first in this series and will continue to buy them. Interesting characters, good pacing, and fully described visuals all contribute to make this a worthy read. However, the frequent typos, poor grammar, run on sentences and gross puntuation errors often force me to reread sentences multiple times to parse the meaning. With some professional proofreading and editing, this series would certainly earn 5 stars.
[4 of 5 Stars!]